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 "You know, I cannot go grocery shopping with you standing there glaring at me." Lana muttered in frustration as she stood in the pasta aisle of the supermarket. "I only want to make sure you get everything on the list," Her mother reminded her, floating over her shoulder. Lana couldn't help but hear a "I know you're going to forget something" condescending tone somewhere in that sentence. "Oh, what do you care? You're a ghost! You're dead!" Lana hissed as she tossed a box of spaghetti into her shopping cart. Her outburst only earned her a pointed look from her mother. Fortunately, she could ignore it because her features were transparent

Nightmare Introductions The Night Princess rested through the morning while Celestia devotedly completed her daytime obligations. The time spent with her new friend did not seem to delay the Sun Princess too much. But even if Celestia had needed any help from her younger sister, Luna was just too tired to assist her. She was nocturnal and as such, more often than not, left the day entirely under the responsibility of her older sister while she peacefully slept to be ready for nighttime. However, she did not expect the afternoon to be disrupted by such commotion. The maintenance ponies sounded busier than ever. They carried themselves in an

She felt the knife slip from her grasp, saw the blade jut forward and tear into her finger, and she gasped. But there was no pain. No injury. The knife clattered onto the cutting board, still completely clean, and Saya brought her hand closer for inspection, disbelief as she looked over the area she had watched the knife cut, her pale skin remaining unbroken. Blood dotted the pages of his book, hand paused as he had nearly taken hold of the next corner. He would have to pay for it. He couldn't possibly return it now. Having heard the small gasp from the kitchen Yagi turned, watching as Saya stared absently at her hand. "It didn't cut me," s